Your endeavour of personifying treachery in friendship and the associated pain is clearly visible from this post, Yatish. Good job...
yatish ji....first time aapko pera hai ..chand shabdo mein bahut kuch kaha hai...aapko perna bahut achcha laga....ae khuda dusmano ki tadad achchi dena........bahut khoobdushmano haat uta ker jiyo barsomere dosto ne mere marne ki dua maangi hai....archana
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Your endeavour of personifying treachery in friendship and the associated pain is clearly visible from this post, Yatish. Good job...
yatish ji....
first time aapko pera hai ..
chand shabdo mein bahut kuch kaha hai...aapko perna bahut achcha laga....
ae khuda dusmano ki tadad achchi dena........bahut khoob
dushmano haat uta ker jiyo barso
mere dosto ne mere marne ki dua maangi hai....
archana
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